【IELTSアカデミック】ライティングで7.0を取る方法と例文・型まとめ

The bar chart illustrates the number of people who graduated with a science qualification in 2005 in three countries, and the qualification type is divided into four groups.

Overall, country C had the highest number of school leavers and doctor’s graduates. There were more bachelor’s and master’s graduates in country B compared to country A and C, while country A recorded the least number of bachelor’s and doctor’s graduates.

More precisely, country C had a significant number of school leavers, and it was more than 60,000 people, and over 60,000 people graduated with a bachelor’s degree in country B. In other words, the number of school leavers and bachelor’s graduates accounts for approximately 70% in total in three countries. On the other hand, master’s and doctor’s graduates consist of roughly 30%. Master’s graduates ranged from about 20,000 to 35,000, and people who graduated with a doctor’s degree were from 10,000 to 20,000.

These days, global warming is one of the significant issues that we confront, and it is vital to take some measures to deal with this serious situation as soon as possible. Some people claim that efforts made by each person can prevent the temperature rise from deteriorating, while others claim that only the measures taken by governments and large corporate enterprises can change the situation. From my perspective, I agree with the former.

Admittedly, it is far from easy to change the critical situation by individual action drastically because the things each person can do are very limited. It seems like the efforts adopted by larger organizations can improve the situation faster and to a great extent. For instance, the giant coffee chain Starbucks now offers iced drinks without plastic straws. It is evident that the amount of plastic they use has been considerably decreasing and it contributes to the environmental problem.

Nonetheless, small things make a big difference. Therefore, it is important that everyone pays attention to environmental issues and takes some action. To prevent global warming, the public needs to make the right decision when it comes to buying products, such as clothes and furniture, and so on. For example, we can buy sustainable products rather than non-sustainable products. This way we can affect more companies to be aware of the environment and make products which are environmentally friendly.

To conclude, I admit that larger organizations have more power to change the serious situation. However, I suppose that each person can do something and every little bit counts. Moreover, if the public makes the right choice, we can even influence the municipal level in some way.

As a result of the increase in the number of cars, we confront significant environmental issues, such as air pollution and global warming. Several automobile manufactures have introduced hybrid cars which make use of electricity and they can reduce emissions of CO2. However, other measures need to be adopted to prevent the situation from deteriorating, and this essay includes two suggested measures to this issue.

First, bike-sharing can play a key role in big cities when it comes to the pollution of air. It is evident that bikes do not require gas and discharge carbon dioxide, therefore they are handy and eco-friendly vehicles. In addition, there are plenty of benefits of bike-sharing, such as becoming fit and saving money on insurance, and so forth. In fact, bike-sharing markets are getting more popular and arrays of bikes can be seen in Canada and European countries.

Second, car-sharing can also play an important role in big cities, such as Tokyo and Toronto. This method still requires cars and discharges CO2. However, this can contribute to the reduction of usage of cars. For instance, people who own their cars tend to use them more often than those who use car sharing. Moreover, cars used in car-sharing are used to the fullest extent, therefore we do not waste cars that are already manufactured.

In conclusion, everyone should take into consideration whether they really need a car or not before purchasing it in order to change the circumstances. Every little bit counts, thus it is essential for all of us to act our part, and I suggest using bike-sharing and car-sharing for an environment.